this is my persuasive writing we wrote about something about either orangutans, why the school should get caps and should families spend more time together I choose to write about why we should get caps because I really like the idea of getting caps.
Does your hat always fly off and run away from you? I and many others think that we (Toroa) should have caps. we would be more careful we would put sunscreen. Plus the bucket hats would always fly off. And doesn't it suck when kids don't wear their hats?
TEACHERS, when you are on duty, do all the kids not wear their hats. Then you have to walk over to the other side of the field and tell them off. Well if we had hats that wouldn't fall off you wouldn't have to do any of that.
You might say that we would get burnt more but we (Toroa) would be more likely to put sunscreen on because we wouldn't throw them around and wreck them and we like them more than the bucket hats.
I sent an email out to everyone with one simple question it was would you like caps Yes No or Maybe. Almost 90 % would prefer caps over bucket hats. This is a clear example that we would like to have caps over bucket hats.
In conclusion, I think that toroa deserves caps and that the teachers would like it as well. We would be more responsible because we are older. And everyone else seems to want them as well. So, in conclusion, we (toroa) think that we should have caps.would you want caps?
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